Openers!!

My 12 openers! Most of them are random thoughts.

1) Shan looks out of the window and sees a man standing in the middle of the vast field. The man who is bare is staring back to her.

2) Dee walks into the old colony house and she look down the hallway and giant portrait of 3 metres tall standing in the middle of the hallway.

3) Xueyan took a deep breath and runs down the slope not noticing she left one of her red heels behind. “No! Xueyan! Don’t go! No! Come back!” the voice echoes from the old colony house on the top of the hill.

4) Xiaohui looks down from the penthouse, the swimming pool is just beneath her puny feet. A hand stretches out and reaches for her cold upper joint.

5) Chris sit on his chair which barely fits his butt with his heart pounding hard and fast. He sits at the corner of the room restlessly and anxiety overwhelms him.

6) The stench in the air gets stronger and stronger as days pass, Yinteng cannot retain her curiousity further and follow the stench to where it comes from.

7) Jian Wei walked home slowly with both his fists clenched tightly. Randoms thoughts of death are running through his mind constantly. “God! Why must you do this to me?!” he chants in his heart.

8) A pair of gold shoes sits on the ground with a pair of jeans lying right beside it. Jie Ling looks into the mirror and mumbled a few words, then fall backwards on her back.

9) Dark clouds gathers and droplets of rain come dripping down. Simin take up the knife fr,fmdklv;om the table and run towards the back door of the house.

10) Maria open her eyes, lying on the bed, she looks at the person next to her. She lights up a cigarette and took a huge puff.

11) A soldier pulls out Shu Yu’s face from the bucket of water. ” So will you speak now?” a voice from the dark asks.

12)  Lily walks out of the room leaving Chen Wei caressing his own body trying to feel the euphoria.

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   theredpants Said:

   on November 22, 2007 at 5:47 pm

   Generally okay although some of them tell more than an opener should, so much so that your potential for story from then on is sucked away.

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