5 shortest stories!

Random thoughts when i was on the bed!

1) Lyn, looking nervous, walks towards Tin who is sipping his third pipping hot coffee. Lyn sits down with her head looking down at her glittering slippers. Tin asks “Honey, what’s wrong?”. All he get for an answer is an awkward silence and Lyn drops a tear of guilt. Lyn wants to make a confession.

2) This puny house is fill with memories hanging on the wall. Potted plants are place along the house which act as fences. The house looks like it is going to fall apart, yet there is this old man still sitting on his rocking chair. A gush of wind blows and the newspaper flies out of his withered hands.

3) Lying on the bed of greens, Limei looks up at the sky and admiring the clouds that roll by. She holds up a gun and point towards the herd of sheep. She fires one shot and the herd scatters. Limei then sits up right and points the gun on the right side of her head.

4) “I’ve been robbed!!!” Simin exclaiming it in her heart. She wraps herself tightly under the warmth of her childhood blanket. Simin has been sobbing for a few days now. When can she stop crying and ponders about what is already in the past? Simin wish that she can fall into a deep deep sleep.

5) Beefball and fishball are stuck in a particular freezer in a hypermarket. They exchange a few glances and realize that the temperature in the freezer is dropping rapidly. They decided to escape from “hell” together as they cannot stand the freezing cold temperature. “Mummy, what do you want to buy for steamboat?” the young boy asks his mother.

The 5th paragraph is totally lame and crappy. I was thinking that all my stories are very sadistic thus i decided to type this down. Cheerios!

1. 

   blahniks Said:

   on November 2, 2007 at 7:01 pm

   Beefball you, fishsticks Hafiz? Haha.
2. 

   hotpinkshiat Said:

   on November 3, 2007 at 12:39 am

   haha no luh jeri! Fishball is my outside friend. it’s ball not stick.
   FUNNY.
3. 

   theredpants Said:

   on November 22, 2007 at 5:50 pm

   Your stories are mostly over 50 words – this exercise is about getting a story in EXACTLY 50 words. Other than that, they’re quite interesting and adventurous – especially beefball and fishball. Good stuff.
4. 

   hotpinkshiat Said:

   on November 23, 2007 at 12:16 pm

   Does it means that my stories are bad? Cause “interesting” is not a good word you see. HAHA.

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